The updated version is the bottom picture, I had to rearrange the whole thing and design a new layout as the picture I chose to use showed my model in a position which would be difficult to place my original design around. So, I got rid of my introduction idea and put a title up instead, also including a kicker beneath to help introduce the story. I edited the photograph on photoshop to extend the black background, making my whole page background black as I thought this was more effective and looked a lot more striking. I decided not to edit out her underwear like I originally planned, because I found it difficult to edit it the right amount without over-doing it. I found that by leaving her underwear visible, it didn't look too bad plus it at least looked real and natural.
I have created the design of my contents page which I have based upon the contents page from 'Glamour' magazine. I thought this was a good magazine to copy as the genre of the magazine is similar to mine, plus the picture I am planning to use for the contents page will fit really well into this design.
